If you're going to call yourself a copywriter, you should probably make sure you don't have any errors in the copy you're using to promote that. Oh, the irony.
You need to work on the copywriting. There are grammar errors. (e.g., “and much more save time and more done”, “access things you in faster than ever before”)
That's a fair point, as that is the primary role of a copywriter. However the author is targeting startups who are unlikely to have the budget to hire an editor to fix the copy provided by the copywriter. It should be part of the package, but on the basis of the OP's own sale copy, it isn't.
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